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PostSubject: Re: Fic request thread!   Fic request thread! - Page 2 EmptyTue Jan 14, 2014 8:37 pm

For starters the way you wrote it. Not in paragraphs but more like a poem. It was really unique reading that. Then the way you thought to use Kai like that, to let me be used by her brother and her being more or less tricked into destroying the world to bring Order's order. Really cool idea. I never would have thought about doing that. It adds a level to her that i never thought of. Then using her child-like nature and spinning it into a job working with kids. Just wow, I love it!
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PostSubject: Re: Fic request thread!   Fic request thread! - Page 2 EmptySat Jan 25, 2014 6:47 pm

UPDATE:

1. Ed, here's another story for you! (idea by Beat, story by me)

Reincarnative Cycle:

2. Kamikaze Kaitou Jeanne (which is really good and you really should read it)  has just been added to the list of stuff I've read.

3. Anyone can request things!
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PostSubject: Re: Fic request thread!   Fic request thread! - Page 2 EmptySun Jan 26, 2014 3:02 am

OH! Merc, I have no words to express my feels, which are good, but i just dunno. I love it and the way it makes me feel. It's warm and fuzzy. hopeful and upbeat. then at the same time it's a little sad and depressing, but even still really positive. i just love it!!
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PostSubject: Re: Fic request thread!   Fic request thread! - Page 2 EmptyMon Feb 03, 2014 2:40 pm

Chef Beat cooked up something! It's hot and ready! Try not to burn while tasting it! Delight Ms. Ed.

 Cheer  Cheer  Cheer 



Fallen maiden.



Part 1 Suffering



Prologue: Shattered memory.



“I…I’m…”

A very beautiful girl lay in a grassland, unconscious. The night breeze caressed her bruised face so slightly…waking her up, a big full moon and a starry sky met her eyes.
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Her body lay in severe pain, her limbs felt weird to her, not sensing anything…they might not be there. She was alive and…dead. Letting such a paradox wash her away…

…She wasn’t sure of her own existence.

Who was she? Why has she injured? Where was she? No answers came to her.

“I can’t remember…I…I’m blank.”

Ignoring the pain, best as she could, the injured girl lifted her head. Inspecting the area, but nothing in sight, grass, Green grass until the eye could see…nothing more, nothing less.

It was like staring into dark oil and trying to gaze any color. Impossible even.

The night breeze cooled her thoughts and just a word came in her mind.

“Chaos…wha…what is chaos?” she asked. “I…I’m chaos? That’s my name.”

No other data could come out. Then, she decided to at least check her state. She didn’t feel her legs or arms, but at least her hearing, eyes and smell were fine.

“Hello Dear.” A gente voice said. “Good to see you’re still alive.”

The girl couldn’t see due to the owner of the voice standing behind her.

“Who…are…you?”

“You poor thing. Given what happened, no surprise you don’t remember.”

“You know me?! Please! Tell me…”

“Shh…it’s alright dear, don’t try to remember or your existence will fade.”

“Fade?”

“You…were banished from the celestial plain, the Takamagahara.”

Takamagahara. As if someone rang a bell, it came back to her. That…that was her home.

“Home…but I…”

“You’re not at fault dear. You were incriminated. For a crime you didn’t commit.”

 She tried to remember but only phrases came to mind…

“She did it!”



“She? The lovely girl? No way!!”



“Punishment!”



“Sorry sis. This is good-bye, rest in peace!”


 

Tears came to her eyes, sadness but…why?

“I…”

“That’s enough. This is the border of life and death. Force yourself and you’re a goner.”

“But…”

“Stubborn as ever. Oh well. Your soul was Split into 5 parts. All that’s left is the consciousness. That’s enough  for you?”

“Yes…for now.”

“Well, there is a way to save yourself.”

“Really?!”

“You’ll be sent to the human realm. That’ll save you.”

“But why? Who are you?”

“In time, when you grow up, you’ll remember. Now rest, dear…”

The girl looks forward at the full moon suspended in the starry sky. It’s beautiful…It’s so benevolent, as if its rays of light were a blessing given to those beneath it…She then fell asleep…
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PostSubject: Re: Fic request thread!   Fic request thread! - Page 2 EmptyMon Feb 03, 2014 3:13 pm

Omnomnom... this is delicious! (and a lot more coherent than my stuff...) 

 Love

Sorry for mailing you all that stuff... and how's the tumblr coming along?
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PostSubject: Re: Fic request thread!   Fic request thread! - Page 2 EmptyMon Feb 03, 2014 10:18 pm

Oh Beat! I love it's I'm so happy that my characters have inspired you guys!
oh yeah and forever keep writing for Kai. She's beyond mad at me for only being able to draw her. Once i get it finished I'll post it for everyone to see!
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PostSubject: Re: Fic request thread!   Fic request thread! - Page 2 EmptyWed Feb 05, 2014 5:40 pm

Bump!

If anyone wants something for Valentine's Day, you can post your request in this thread!
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PostSubject: Re: Fic request thread!   Fic request thread! - Page 2 EmptyWed Feb 05, 2014 6:30 pm

I do! I'd like a Usax Seiya Fic!
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PostSubject: Re: Fic request thread!   Fic request thread! - Page 2 EmptyWed Feb 05, 2014 6:37 pm

Ed, how canon compliant and happy do you want said fic to be?
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PostSubject: Re: Fic request thread!   Fic request thread! - Page 2 EmptyWed Feb 05, 2014 7:53 pm

I don't like Mamoru. So you don't even have be run with canon at all, I'd like to see some romance and cuteness. Lovey dovey stuff.
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PostSubject: Re: Fic request thread!   Fic request thread! - Page 2 EmptyThu Feb 06, 2014 12:56 pm

Utena wrote:
I don't like Mamoru. So you don't even have be run with canon at all

*Insert Gloria in excelus Deus and angelic Chorus*

Give this girl soms cookies. No, wait scratch that. Give this girl cookies, Pepsi and Doritos.

I'm sure the entire fandom....GalaxyCauldroncofcofcofcofcof...would've protested for that comment. But Ed so wonderful she doesn't care. Right guys, we got orders! Extra fluffy, pink and tasty! Tres bien! C'est Magnifique! travailler sur la nourriture pour elle! Let's go!
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PostSubject: Re: Fic request thread!   Fic request thread! - Page 2 EmptyThu Feb 06, 2014 8:35 pm

Beat wrote:
Utena wrote:
I don't like Mamoru. So you don't even have be run with canon at all

*Insert Gloria in excelus Deus and angelic Chorus*

Give this girl soms cookies. No, wait scratch that. Give this girl cookies, Pepsi and Doritos.

I'm sure the entire fandom....GalaxyCauldroncofcofcofcofcof...would've protested for that comment. But Ed so wonderful she doesn't care. Right guys, we got orders! Extra fluffy, pink and tasty! Tres bien! C'est Magnifique! travailler sur la nourriture pour elle! Let's go!

yay!! Cookies, Doritos and Pepsi! Woot!
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PostSubject: Re: Fic request thread!   Fic request thread! - Page 2 EmptyThu Feb 06, 2014 8:39 pm

So was that intended to be a character judgement?
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PostSubject: Re: Fic request thread!   Fic request thread! - Page 2 EmptyThu Feb 06, 2014 8:49 pm

Did I offend when I stated my dislike for Mamoru with Usagi? I didn't mean too, but we are all entitled to our thoughts and opinions on things. It's a personal preference really, i just don't care for this canon pairing is all. If you'd rather not write about this that's understandable, I never want to make someone do something they aren't comfortable with.

And i'm having a seizure, i'm gonna go before it get's really bad.
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PostSubject: Re: Fic request thread!   Fic request thread! - Page 2 EmptyThu Feb 06, 2014 8:52 pm

Shock 

Utena, are you okay?

The character judgement thing was a joke.
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