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Mew Ami Cafe Owner
Posts : 5807 Coffee Beans : 13009 Join date : 2012-06-30 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Should I write this? Tue May 21, 2013 1:10 am | |
| Okay so I have an idea for a TMM fanfic. I actually started to publish it, but I deleted because I was worried about the idea of it.
It's a KxI fic.
It takes place during the alien invasion and focuses on Kisshu's inner turmoil about Ichigo and his people. The characters are older and the reasons why, Kish gets Ichigo pregnant. Now he didn't rape her. I would never write a fic like that and I strongly believe Kish would never rape Ichigo.
So thoughts on this idea? Should I go back to this and revamp this idea? Does it fit better into a RP storyline? |
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SeleneHime Magical Girl
Posts : 654 Coffee Beans : 560 Join date : 2012-06-30 Age : 29 Location : Somewhere in my mind.
| Subject: Re: Should I write this? Tue May 21, 2013 1:30 am | |
| I'm ... interested in hearing how this comes about, yes. |
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Mew Ami Cafe Owner
Posts : 5807 Coffee Beans : 13009 Join date : 2012-06-30 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: Should I write this? Tue May 21, 2013 1:31 am | |
| LOL!!
Ive been tossing this idea backforth for years now. I really like digging into Kisshu's turmoil. I'm just unsure if I can write this idea well. |
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SeleneHime Magical Girl
Posts : 654 Coffee Beans : 560 Join date : 2012-06-30 Age : 29 Location : Somewhere in my mind.
| Subject: Re: Should I write this? Tue May 21, 2013 1:33 am | |
| It would most certainly be a tricky one to pull off, given the content and then the complications of war. I imagine Pai is none too happy with him, either. |
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Mew Ami Cafe Owner
Posts : 5807 Coffee Beans : 13009 Join date : 2012-06-30 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: Should I write this? Tue May 21, 2013 1:34 am | |
| Kish's goal his to hide this fact from Pai. XD
It's just I have a wimpy solution for Kish that helps him find ease. |
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SeleneHime Magical Girl
Posts : 654 Coffee Beans : 560 Join date : 2012-06-30 Age : 29 Location : Somewhere in my mind.
| Subject: Re: Should I write this? Tue May 21, 2013 1:38 am | |
| XD, and what is this solution? |
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Mew Ami Cafe Owner
Posts : 5807 Coffee Beans : 13009 Join date : 2012-06-30 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: Should I write this? Tue May 21, 2013 1:39 am | |
| Gather the mew aqua to save his planet. XD
I mean they do find this solution in the manga and anime. XD
What's sad it's kind of obvious and Lettuce was right. They should have talked things out. XD |
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SeleneHime Magical Girl
Posts : 654 Coffee Beans : 560 Join date : 2012-06-30 Age : 29 Location : Somewhere in my mind.
| Subject: Re: Should I write this? Tue May 21, 2013 2:23 am | |
| XD, the saying is "Hindsight is 20-20" for a reason, correct? But how you use the canon suggestion is what will really effect your storyline.
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Mew Ami Cafe Owner
Posts : 5807 Coffee Beans : 13009 Join date : 2012-06-30 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: Should I write this? Tue May 21, 2013 10:40 am | |
| I think I wont have Kish realize it right away. Maybe he realizes it after finding the mew aqua randomly or see a mew use it. Yeah I would let the other girls use it like in the manga. |
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SeleneHime Magical Girl
Posts : 654 Coffee Beans : 560 Join date : 2012-06-30 Age : 29 Location : Somewhere in my mind.
| Subject: Re: Should I write this? Tue May 21, 2013 11:13 am | |
| Well, that would be a given, yes. (And Lettuce did use the Mew Aqua when she got the porpoise fin, I believe, in the anime.) |
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Mew Ami Cafe Owner
Posts : 5807 Coffee Beans : 13009 Join date : 2012-06-30 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: Should I write this? Tue May 21, 2013 11:16 am | |
| Yeah, but only Ichigo used the mew aqau rod and attack. |
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SeleneHime Magical Girl
Posts : 654 Coffee Beans : 560 Join date : 2012-06-30 Age : 29 Location : Somewhere in my mind.
| Subject: Re: Should I write this? Tue May 21, 2013 11:39 am | |
| A fair point, yes. What will Kisshu be up to when he finds the location of the Mew Aqua? |
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Mew Ami Cafe Owner
Posts : 5807 Coffee Beans : 13009 Join date : 2012-06-30 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: Should I write this? Tue May 21, 2013 11:41 am | |
| Probably with Pai and Tart?
I think I would him still fight with Pai and Tart and of course Ichigo will be against that. |
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Mew Ami Cafe Owner
Posts : 5807 Coffee Beans : 13009 Join date : 2012-06-30 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: Should I write this? Wed May 22, 2013 11:34 pm | |
| I think I am going to write this. But I think I will post it on here first before I publish it on FF. If I did publish it, my readers be like OMG!!! She uploaded a new story, but she hasnt updated this story!!
Here is a sample of the prologue:
To him she was just a toy. She was just an object he found amusement of out. Yet has time went by something came over him. He felt something toward her. A feeling he never felt before. He was confused at first and tried to deny it. She was just a toy! He told himself. But he eventually grew to like that feeling and accepted it. He felt happy for once in his life, but he found his happiness was tearing apart. Reality caused this tear and he had no idea what to do.
I don't think I'm going to go with it. Or I might skip it all together and not have a prologue. |
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SeleneHime Magical Girl
Posts : 654 Coffee Beans : 560 Join date : 2012-06-30 Age : 29 Location : Somewhere in my mind.
| Subject: Re: Should I write this? Thu May 23, 2013 8:46 pm | |
| The prologue seems a little rushed, unless you're planning to include it with chapter one. |
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