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PostSubject: Ami's needs some opinions   Ami's needs some opinions EmptyWed Jan 16, 2013 3:49 pm

Okay, peeps. I thought of a new fanfic to write I want to follow through with this. I think I'm going to write out a few chapters at a time to help keep it updated. Anyway, it's going to be a KxI fic. I really want to write a fanfic exploring Ichigo's and Kish's relationship after the invasion.

So I need some opinions. Should I write this in first person or third person? I feel like I can write some good scenes in first person. However first person is restricting. I don't know what to do. Ami's needs some opinions 1786228450


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PostSubject: Re: Ami's needs some opinions   Ami's needs some opinions EmptyWed Jan 16, 2013 10:44 pm

I say you stick to third person. It's easier than writing in first. :D
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PostSubject: Re: Ami's needs some opinions   Ami's needs some opinions EmptyThu Jan 17, 2013 12:20 am

Yeah I feel the same way as well. :/ I wrote the prologue in first though just because it randomly pop into my head. Do you think it would be bad to have a prologue in first person then write the rest in third person?
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PostSubject: Re: Ami's needs some opinions   Ami's needs some opinions EmptyThu Jan 17, 2013 3:53 pm

If you're going to write in third person then I feel like it should stay in third person because it can get confusing to the reader. All my Tokyo mew mew fics are written in first person which I regret lol. Third person is much easier than switching POV unless you plan to write the whole fic that way.
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PostSubject: Re: Ami's needs some opinions   Ami's needs some opinions EmptyThu Jan 17, 2013 11:12 pm

Good point. I can rewrite the prologue in third person. Okay, now I need some opinions about titles. I am terrible at coming up with titles.

Forgotten
Lost
Gone
Even if you dont need it
Distant Memories
Consumed
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This is what I have so far. Out of these which ones are the lamest?
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PostSubject: Re: Ami's needs some opinions   Ami's needs some opinions EmptyFri Jan 18, 2013 1:51 am

Consumed sounds the most intriguing, but what are you going for?
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LOL I'm not sure. These are just titles I popped into my mind and I wanted some input on them.
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PostSubject: Re: Ami's needs some opinions   Ami's needs some opinions EmptyFri Jan 18, 2013 1:56 am

XD, well, you did say that you were planning it out now. Would it be too spoilery?
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PostSubject: Re: Ami's needs some opinions   Ami's needs some opinions EmptyFri Jan 18, 2013 2:03 am

Well, 3 years later after the alien invasion planet alien is dealing with political turmoil. Some aliens still want earth while the others want to live on their revived planet. Two aliens go to earth to start a new invasion. To do so they decide to create a strong comrade by injecting alien DNA into one of the mews. This mews happens to be Ichigo. That's all I can say for now. :3
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PostSubject: Re: Ami's needs some opinions   Ami's needs some opinions EmptyFri Jan 18, 2013 2:05 am

XD, can I ask a question? How will injecting Ichigo with their DNA, just one injection, have an effect? Wouldn't her immune system destroy it as foreign material?
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PostSubject: Re: Ami's needs some opinions   Ami's needs some opinions EmptyFri Jan 18, 2013 2:06 am

Hmm I didn't think about that? If you put that way wouldnt that happen with Ryou injecting the animal DNA?
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PostSubject: Re: Ami's needs some opinions   Ami's needs some opinions EmptyFri Jan 18, 2013 2:08 am

While that is true, Ryou was bouncing off his father's work with already tested DNA infusion. The aliens tend to work off of metaphysical fusion, such as extracting souls and whatnot. Or putting those jellyfish-looking-things into their chimera of the day.

I imagine that humanoid DNA is much more complex, fusion-wise, than animal DNA.
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PostSubject: Re: Ami's needs some opinions   Ami's needs some opinions EmptyFri Jan 18, 2013 2:09 am

Very true..It could be a series of injections then?
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PostSubject: Re: Ami's needs some opinions   Ami's needs some opinions EmptyFri Jan 18, 2013 2:18 am

*Nods.* That would also make the story a bit more interesting, I think. :3

(Heading off for the night. Sleep well!)
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PostSubject: Re: Ami's needs some opinions   Ami's needs some opinions EmptyFri Jan 18, 2013 2:20 am

Thanks for some input about that. :3

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