Okay so I have an idea for a TMM fanfic. I actually started to publish it, but I deleted because I was worried about the idea of it.

It's a KxI fic.

It takes place during the alien invasion and focuses on Kisshu's inner turmoil about Ichigo and his people. The characters are older and the reasons why, Kish gets Ichigo pregnant. Now he didn't rape her. I would never write a fic like that and I strongly believe Kish would never rape Ichigo.

So thoughts on this idea? Should I go back to this and revamp this idea? Does it fit better into a RP storyline?

I'm ... interested in hearing how this comes about, yes.

LOL!!

Ive been tossing this idea backforth for years now. I really like digging into Kisshu's turmoil. I'm just unsure if I can write this idea well.

It would most certainly be a tricky one to pull off, given the content and then the complications of war. I imagine Pai is none too happy with him, either.

Kish's goal his to hide this fact from Pai. XD

It's just I have a wimpy solution for Kish that helps him find ease.

XD, and what is this solution?

Gather the mew aqua to save his planet. XD

I mean they do find this solution in the manga and anime. XD

What's sad it's kind of obvious and Lettuce was right. They should have talked things out. XD

XD, the saying is "Hindsight is 20-20" for a reason, correct? But how you use the canon suggestion is what will really effect your storyline.

I think I wont have Kish realize it right away. Maybe he realizes it after finding the mew aqua randomly or see a mew use it. Yeah I would let the other girls use it like in the manga.

Well, that would be a given, yes. (And Lettuce did use the Mew Aqua when she got the porpoise fin, I believe, in the anime.)

Yeah, but only Ichigo used the mew aqau rod and attack.

A fair point, yes. What will Kisshu be up to when he finds the location of the Mew Aqua?

Probably with Pai and Tart?

I think I would him still fight with Pai and Tart and of course Ichigo will be against that.

I think I am going to write this. But I think I will post it on here first before I publish it on FF. If I did publish it, my readers be like OMG!!! She uploaded a new story, but she hasnt updated this story!!

Here is a sample of the prologue:

To him she was just a toy. She was just an object he found amusement of out. Yet has time went by something came over him. He felt something toward her. A feeling he never felt before. He was confused at first and tried to deny it. She was just a toy! He told himself. But he eventually grew to like that feeling and accepted it. He felt happy for once in his life, but he found his happiness was tearing apart. Reality caused this tear and he had no idea what to do.


I don't think I'm going to go with it. Or I might skip it all together and not have a prologue.

The prologue seems a little rushed, unless you're planning to include it with chapter one.