It would with chapter one. I'm thinking about not doing a prologue all together.

Just wondering, as that would really effect the way your presentation looked.

I was just writing randomly last night. XD Just a rough draft.

Hehe, yeah, understandable.

Might as well use this thread to talk about Torn Between Two!


Ichigo falls ill with an alien illness. It's kind of like how the European Explores got the Indians sick.

Which do you think is better?

It's a common illness and the aliens have the meds for it, but it's last bottle. Kish takes it and gives it to Ichigo.

Or

It's an illness you only get once and all three aliens have gotten. So Kish makes a call home to order some meds and lies saying Tart has come down with the said illness. He gets the meds and gives it to Ichigo.

If I go with the second method Pai and Tart can notice something is up with Kish.

XD, you know, I can't believe that's never crossed my mind for this fandom. (The interracial illnesses, as it is a big play on location and whatnot.)

As for the "better" choice ... Even if it was a common illness, but still a serious one, I can see that being more plausible than the "only once" if the trio has already all had it. How would she catch it otherwise?

Well, if I remember correctly the settlers spread one time diseases, but I could be wrong.

So maybe I should go with the common illness instead. The Alien Flu basically. XD


Btw the way the spreading of diseases to Indians from settlers gave me this idea for this story.

Hehe, I see. Well, history can be very inspiring. (Not to mention, people should learn from what they do not. Sadly, we see it repeated more often than we should.)

I just hope I can deliver all the emotional impact that this fic requires.

(sadly people dont learn from history and children today aren't being taught right. You learn true history from college sadly.)

I'm sure you're capable of it, Yami-chan. *Huggles*

(Unfortunately. T_T)

Okay today I thought I add to the story:

Before Ichigo gets sick her and Kish get trap some how underground due a battle. I need to strength their connection with each other and gives Ichigo another chance to see the good sides of Kish. Plus it also explains how she got sick. She was trapped in a small space and close contact with him.