I am currently working on my next KxI fic. I thought I give a little preview of chapter one! :)

Title: Love and Death
Rating: PG13 (I just set this rating to be safe on FF)
Plot: Kisshu's latest plan backfires on him. He now has to face the consequences of one of his love ones dieing. Will he able to make the right decision? (the summary needs some work)

Please note: I have not edited chapter one. So they may be grammar and spelling errors. Also this is a rough draft so things might change when I actually post it on FF.

Also all my fanfics follow the anime not the manga.
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chapter one: Can I?

It was a cold winter night in Tokyo City. People in the city were moving as fast as they could to beat the cold. In the heart of the city was Kisshu who was sitting on top of a building. He looked a mess. His hair was untidy and his clothes were torn. Kisshu also had bandages wrapped around his stomach. You could see blood stains all over the bandages. Kisshu has not been resting so his wounds weren’t staying close.

Kisshu was watching the people down below trying to keep his mind off things. It was no use he couldn’t help, but think about the last battle. Last night his friends Pai and Taruto were trying to get rid of the mew mews by trapping them inside of Mew Ichigo’s dreams. It would have worked if Kisshu didn’t let his emotions get in the way. He hit his head in anger. His emotions kept on getting in the way of battle. If only he could put them aside then this stupid war for Earth would be over.

Speaking of his feelings for Ichigo Kisshu couldn’t help think about her attraction to other men. First there was Aoyama Masaya a boy from her school. Ichigo and him were apparently an item. He didn’t understand what she saw in that boy. Aoyama seem liked a dull person. Then there was the Blue Knight. Well, Ichigo wasn’t truly attracted to this man, but he kept showing up when she was in deep trouble. He then would save Ichigo and beat him in a battle.

That was how Kisshu got his wounds. It was last week during a battle with the mew mews. The Blue Knight slashed his sword against his stomach. Kisshu clenched his fist angrily. How did that man beat him? Kisshu trained extensibly before coming to Earth. This Blue Knight seemed new to sword fighting, but yet he was good. He was too good.

Kisshu looked up to the sky and wonder why the Blue Knight decided to appear. He never appeared until that fight when Ichigo was sick. Before that if Ichigo was trouble her teammates would have to help her. Wait a minute. Around that time Ichigo and Aoyama were becoming very close. Why after that battle at Tokyo Tower the two became an item. So did that mean..

Okay, while you said you haven't edited, I'm going to just point out some things that you might not have yet.

"You could see blood stains all over the bandages."
First person, when it started as third? Entire stance (Not POV, since that's individual characters) jumping usually takes me out of a story lickity-split, so unless this was intentional, you'll want to alter that.

"If only he could put them aside then this stupid war for Earth would be over."
'and then' would make this sentence flow better.

"Speaking of his feelings for Ichigo Kisshu couldn’t help think about her attraction to other men."
Comma after Ichigo.

"Ichigo and him were apparently an item."
Apparently, he and Ichigo were an item.

"Kisshu trained extensibly before coming to Earth."
Extensively, no "b" in the word.

And aside from the typo in your plot teaser ("Dying", not "dieing"), it seems you're off to a good start. ^^

O.O I thought you could mention the word you. I guess I should say there were blood all over the bandages.

Thanks for fixing my spelling error. I was having a fight with word about it. Word does not help with spelling mistakes.

I hope this fic will be popular like my You Are Not Aline fic.

XD, "you" is best used when one character is talking to another. When it's used outside of conversation, it counts as the jumping of 'persons' (AKA; first, second, third). You write in third person, like me, so you need to weed out first person references.

And no problem! Occasionally there are words that temporarily slip my mind, and those are the nights Word refuses to give me the proper spelling, XD. And good luck on that!

If you can deal with my sporadic work schedule, I can Beta-read for you.

I think I can deal with it. :P I take a long time to update.

Lolz, hopefully you don't take as long as I do. I can go months between updates, unfortunately.

Me too!! :D

XD, wow. Well, I guess we're two peas in a pod, then, regarding that.

Nice...
Also, I was once going to create a Kisshu x Ichigo (or a Kisshu x Me :p) fanific titled Love and Death...
We seem to have a lot in common about TMM :D xx

haha we do! I was originally going to have it be Love or Death, but Love and Death makes for sense.

Selene,I'm almost finished typing up chapter one. Would you still like to beta read it? If you're busy I understand.

I will. ^^

awesome! I still need to type up the rest! Video games distract me dearly! I'm done with my internship for the summer so I have more time to work on it. I'll pm you it when I'm finished.

Hehe, and I'm off the next three days. Yay! ^^

yay! I still need to type it up. ^^*