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PostSubject: Re: Ritsuko Aino(wip)   Thu Sep 22, 2016 12:07 am

ok, I believe the profile is nearly complete  but i need more feedback?
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PostSubject: Re: Ritsuko Aino(wip)   Thu Sep 29, 2016 3:55 pm

Hi! 

Add all those notes you have cause they are really detailed to your bio. make a special notes section for them so they're part of your bio. this looks really good! The only problem i have is with her and her twin being born 2 weeks apart. I dont think that can actually happen, and i for sure dont think Ami would have left Mina in labor for 2 weeks like that. I suggest looking into that again. 

as for you attacks and powers you can have a list of them that they gain as they grow in their powers. Its easier that way you have an idea of what your character growth looks like or you can add them as needed for the rp. I like your Chibi Venus, would Neo Venus power! make up! be an option to power up? Just an idea ^^ When i write bios like this im sure in include as much as i can for the growth to save myself time later on, but that's me and it is optional to do so at the start like this.



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PostSubject: Re: Ritsuko Aino(wip)   Thu Sep 29, 2016 6:49 pm

actually, Luna, Only Ritsuko has powers. I am not sure why you think they both have powers. Chikara is a normal athletic girl.


 Um  Ritsuko does have a transformation phrase. Did you miss it?
 what special notes? I thought I incorporated everything into her bio?

ok, changed the chronology. Tell  me what you think. yeah... I am bad at math.
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PostSubject: Re: Ritsuko Aino(wip)   Wed Nov 23, 2016 2:56 pm

IS THERE anyone who will comment on this and tell me if her profile is ok or not?
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